
This is my first progress shot. My work has been progressing well, considering that I missed a few sessions. I went for the basic vector portrait, because I don’t want the image to take too much from the text. There is one major difficulty that I have been facing through this whole artwork. The difficulty is my vision. I haven’t been able to decide on what I really wanted for my project. So I’ll start my work, then change my idea, and that starts to take up my time and cloud my vision. Something I dislike about my work is how the lines are edgy and need smoothing, which is something I can fix easily. Next I will add text and implement the design principles ‘hierarchy’.

This is my second and last progress shot before I will reveal my final project. although this shot looks very similar to the last one, some careful planning went in place. At first, I thought it would be a good idea to place the declaration for freedom of speech, right to education, and the right to life in Malala’s hijab. However I tried putting my final text over that and it looked too messy and convoluted. So I tried putting it in the background and that was more successful. Next, I will be adding the final text and then posting my evaluation.
Here is the link to the site where I got the declaration from. (The United Nations Universal Declaration Of Human Rights) https://www.un.org/en/universal-declaration-human-rights/

So this is my third and last progress shot before the final artwork! It may look like the final artwork but there is a few things I dislike and feel the urge to change.
Firstly, I think the white, bold text is encroaching the borders of the artwork and gives off a crowded effect. Secondly, one of the design principles that was given to us as a topic was contrast. And right now, nothing is contrasting with anything.
So looking forward, I will change the colour of something (most likely the hijab), so that contrast is implemented. Also, I will be playing around with the text to make it more satisfying.












